Thursday, October 1, 2009

topic sentence molly labrash

In the short story "Lady or the Tiger" The semi-barbaric princess most values her powers, the clues point to how she is in charge and in control she has to have all the best including her love. While writing this topic sentence i learned about the different sentence types, such as simple, complex, compound etc.

2 comments:

  1. I think your topic sentence is really good but i would fix the sentence structure.

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  2. the way you organized your topic sentence was really good. it flowed nicely and it was very well worded together. good job!

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