The princesses most values are keeping the prince and his love to herself because she doesn't want anyone else to be with him since she considered him to be eaten by the tiger instead of marrying the lady.
*The princess most valued keeping the prince and his love to herself because she doesn't want anyone to be with him since she considered him to be eaten by a tiger instead of marrying the lady.
I learned that sometimes its good to have details in the sentence but to make sure that the details don't over crowd the sentence and make it seem cluttered.
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GREAT!!! I think this is a great topic sentence for the lady and the tiger story. "Princesses" refers to more than one princess. But great I like it a lot.
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