Thursday, October 1, 2009

The Lady or the Tiger

After I read the story "The Lady or The Tiger" I thought the princess valued her lovers reputation and looks more than the lover himself, also that she didnt want anyone else to be with him because of who he is.


While i was doing this i learned that my writing confuses people sometimes. Im going to try and write clearer next time.

3 comments:

  1. I like how you phrased your sentence. It has good ideas but it could probably be more organized. Its a bit jumbled.

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  2. It's a bit unorganized but otherwise great job!

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