"The Lady or the Tiger" Topic Sentence LexieC

In the beginning the princess most values her lover, however; as the story progresses the princess ends up caring most about who her lover is betrothed.

~In the beginning the princess most values her love for her lover, however; as circumstances change the princesses values convert and she becomes selfish and cares most about who her lover is betrothed.

~I learned one thing about writing this topic sentence. I learned that good word choice will catch peoples eyes, and that it will make a huge difference in peoples reaction to your writing.