Thursday, October 1, 2009

Topic Sentence.. Hope M. ;)

Happiness and royalty are most definitely the central points in the princesses life. The princess in my point of view is focused on her personal happiness, and her royalty. Everything is all about the princess.
*I learned that when reflecting on something you need to keep the main points in mind. You can let your imagination soar, but don't let it wander too far! Keep on task, keep your information organized, and use great word choice!

7 comments:

  1. I love your post!!! It is creative and to the point!! Great job Hope!!!!

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  3. I really like it Hope. I agree with that everything is about how is about her. That is very true. haha. it amazing!!!

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  4. I love it but you should add more detail and possibly try adding the title but if i ruins the sentence then don't worry about it, be sides that it is so much better than mine lol!!!!!

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  5. I think that before you say Everything is always about the princess, you should put a comma but besides that it is fantabulous.

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  6. I love the new word choice. I really like how descriptive it is. :)

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