After reading "The Lady or the Tiger" I've found that even though the princess values her natural barbaric instincts, the life of her lover is valued much more.
* In "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess had hard options, should she tell her lover the door with the lady or the tiger; even though she has a tough choice before her, the love she feels toward her lover will greatly over power her barbaric nature.
After reading the different comments written about my topic sentence I learned that even if you have a really short topic sentence that is OK, because if you have a lot of good information or a good map to your paragraph then your topic sentence will make sense.
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I like your topic sentence. I think in your topic sentence you should put what door you think the lover chose.
ReplyDeleteWow that is a really good topic sentence!!
ReplyDeleteYour topic sentence is good, but the revised one is better
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