Thursday, October 1, 2009

Topic Sentence Erin K.

From the story, The Lady or the Tiger, the princess values her father and his views the most because of her love for him.

*From the story The Lady or the Tiger, the princess values her father and his views the most because of the power she craves.


I learned that, well i didn't really learn anything.
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  1. Molly LOctober 1, 2009 at 7:11 AM

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  3. Carly IOctober 2, 2009 at 6:57 AM

    this is a good statement but she would want his power over loving him.

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  4. Molly LOctober 2, 2009 at 6:59 AM

    i like the topic sentence, good way to start it off.

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  5. squintcrwoleyOctober 2, 2009 at 7:01 AM

    its a good sentence but maybe you can make it more detailed and tell why. maybe pull things from the story to tell why you think that.:-)

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