Personal happiness matters most to the proud princess rather than true love, and life and happiness for another, a person she truly loves.
***I like my original post!***
***I learned that compound-complex sentences usually the best sentences for topic sentences. I also learned that using a lot of vocab and being somewhat wordy, are usually beneficial for a good topic sentence.***
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I love your topic sentence! Its a mixture of great word choices with awesome transitions! Great!! =)
ReplyDeleteWOW, I really really like your topic sentence. I really like how you used all those adjectives, it really helped give it a clearer picture in my head.
ReplyDeleteI think it's fine just the way it is!!!! It is great and pacts a big punch even though it is so small.
ReplyDeleteyou don't have to change it at all LOVE IT!!! Fantabulous
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