After reading "The Lady or The Tiger" I can clearly see that the princess values her love with the man more than anything;however,she is self interested and leads the man to the door with the vicious tiger behind it because of her jealousy of the other woman.
In this activity I learned a lot about using the correct sentence structure and sentence fluency. I had a lot of comments about my ending being very confusing but i did go back and fix it. Finally I have to make sure that I use a strong word choice.
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Your topic sentence is really good, but the ending seems kind of confusing. Maybe rearranging the words after the comma would help. Other than that, the word choice and sentence fluency is really good!
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ReplyDeleteI think you have a great topic sentence and it clear and gets the point across.
ReplyDeleteIn one of your sentences try saying (than seeing him with another man) instead of saying over another man.
ReplyDeletealso try defending or stating a point that you think is a good point i guess you could say. otherwise i like your topic sentence. :)
maybe change the "over seeing" part... other than that good job!
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