In life, the princess values beauty, love and her own self the most.
* In the story "The Lady or the Tiger," the princess is faced with a hard decision because in life she values beauty, love and herself the most.
I learned from writing this topic sentence that it is harder than I thought to write the sentence. I found that it is hardest to make the sentence well written and fit all the information in it. Although I feel like I learned new ways to write and I liked reading everyone elses posts.
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It's a good sentence and very true, but there's not really any explanation. It might help if you could support your ideas.
ReplyDeleteI like your topic sentence and i agree with you. I think you should make it a little more detailed.
ReplyDeleteYes, I do wish that I could add something else to make it better. Thanks for your comments!
ReplyDeletelove it!! simple, but powerful at the same time! awesome! :)
ReplyDeleteI really like it. I love how it was brief but gets the point across. u go girl!!!! hahaha
ReplyDeleteShort and Sweet!!!!!!! It expresses your opinion very bluntly and well!!
ReplyDeletei would change "most" to "more than her love for her lover." but i like it a lot!
ReplyDeleteThe topic sentence is good on the revised one and the original versionwas good, but not enough of detail
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