in the infuriating story of the lady and the tiger, the princess doesn't value much, but herself. she didn't want her her lover with anyone else but her. so she would have chosen the tiger over the lady.
what i learned from writing the topic sentence was that you don't want to repeat the question asked, but make a connection to it. and how you have to use better word choice to grab people and to incorporate more detail.
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ReplyDeletei think your topic sentence is really good but i would take out the end where it says "so she would have chosen the tiger over the lady" because it isn't needed in the topic sentence.
ReplyDeletei agree, Strong topic sentence, good way to start a paragraph. also good support. way to go carly.
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