I think i learned that having other people read your writing is important because they can tell you there thoughts about how your writing can be better.
This comment showed what the princess valued which was the lover. The wording in the post was pretty good I think it could have been stronger but the sentence type is good and strong too.
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ReplyDeleteThis comment showed what the princess valued which was the lover. The wording in the post was pretty good I think it could have been stronger but the sentence type is good and strong too.
ReplyDeleteThink about word choice. This is a good sentence but I think it needs a little something...:)
ReplyDeleteThis is really good and it gets to the point really well, it just needs detail or better word choice.
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