Values,After reading "The Lady and The Tiger" I think that the princess values the trust and love "The Lover" had for her. In my mind. "The Lover" was wrong to trust the princes, considering she was just like her father who was quite barbaric, and selfish.
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*** After reading the story "The Lady and The Tiger" by Frank Stockton i think that the princesses jealousy over rules her her feelings for her lover. In my mind, even though the princess loved "The Lover" what the princess values most is herself, and you can see that she is just like her father, selfish and barbaric.***
What I learned: While doing this assignment, i learned how to improve my writing by using sentence fluency and depleting my linking verbs and using stronger words.
**New Topic Sentence**
*** After reading the story "The Lady and The Tiger" by Frank Stockton i think that the princesses jealousy over rules her her feelings for her lover. In my mind, even though the princess loved "The Lover" what the princess values most is herself, and you can see that she is just like her father, selfish and barbaric.***
What I learned: While doing this assignment, i learned how to improve my writing by using sentence fluency and depleting my linking verbs and using stronger words.
Great job on making sure you restated the question. You also had great word choice and sentence fluency. :)
ReplyDeletestar out with something that gets the person to read. find a better word then "values" to start with.
ReplyDeleteYour topic sentence is really good. I can't think of anything to suggest that could help you make it better!
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