In the story "lady or the Tiger," by Frank Stockton, The princess values her lover but she lead him to the tiger because she did not want him to be with the lady behind the door. So the princess values her self at the end of the story because she just like her father"barbaric."
I learned that you should not let your barbaric personality get in the way when it comes to relations with your friends, family and or personal relations.
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Great job on putting her values into the paragraph and nice word choice. I'm not sure if you were supposed to summarize but other than that it was great. :)
ReplyDeleteI would put the last sentence first, so that you display the topic right away. Also, like Amanda said, it seems more like a summary than a topic sentence. Maybe try condensing it more, so it's not so lengthy. Other than that, it's pretty good.
ReplyDeleteIn my oppinion, you should delete the first sentece compleatly but remember to put the title and authors name andotherwise i like it :)
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