The princess's main concern was that her lover had only eyes for her this is best shown in the story when she kept imaging her lover marring that other woman.
I learned that you have to keep your sentence simple and to the point.
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good point, great sentence!
ReplyDeleteA little confusing, but i love the idea!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with both people. It's kind of scrambled... but good job!
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