The Lady or the Tiger showed a princess valuing and striving on only love and attention.
new one! The Lady and the Tiger shows a princess striving only on love and attention; she values only what is good for her and what she feels is right.
From doing the topics sentence and having our "island mates" study them and help revise them or give responses helped. It showed me what to improve on and how to make my topic sentence and put more detail into it. This activity helped me also because i looked at other sentences and it helped me change mine around.
good but it could be better if you explained a little more.
ReplyDeleteIt has really good word choice but it could have more detail.
ReplyDeleteThe second one is a lot better than the first and it explains the situation better with good word choice.
ReplyDelete#2!! I like the second one better. It has better word choice and a little more in depth. Perhaps if anything it needs to be a little more straight forward and lees confusing to the average reader. :)
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