New one: In the story "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess has second thoughts about the love she and the man share together, when he is forced to choose one out of two doors the princess points him to one, does her jealousy get the best of her or will their love still go on?
1) People commenting on my topic sentence helped me make changes that made it better and helped me get a better understanding of what a topic sentence should sound like.
2) I learned that topic sentences should grab the readers attention by using good words but getting straight to what the rest of the paragraph is going to be like.
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I think this sentence really shows what the princess valued which was the lover, but i think the sentence is a little run on. Other than that the sentence really is strong and supports the topic.
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ReplyDeleteI thought the princess pointed to the door on the right...Well i thought it was really good, and i also think it supports the topic.
ReplyDeleteIt's good but a little bit of a run on. Maybe tighten it up a tad haha:)
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