Thursday, October 1, 2009

In the "Lady or the Tiger", the princess values the love for her prince and jealousy because he might get married to the lady instead of the princess, if he picked the door that has the lady.

Topic sentence- Kristen P

Being with her lover, and having him to herself is the one thing that she truly values and cares about when making decisions.

The Lady and The Tiger

After reading the story 'The Lady and The Tiger' i think the princess most values her love and getting what she wants. She does not want anyone to be happy if she cant, i think shes really selfish. :)

topic sentence molly labrash

In the short story "Lady or the Tiger" The semi-barbaric princess most values her powers, the clues point to how she is in charge and in control she has to have all the best including her love. While writing this topic sentence i learned about the different sentence types, such as simple, complex, compound etc.

Lady in the Tiger Topic Sentence

The death of her lover or the fate of seeing him fall in love with another.

The princess values love and her relationship with this man more than she values her place in society.

Alex Y

New one: In the story "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess has second thoughts about the love she and the man share together, when he is forced to choose one out of two doors the princess points him to one, does her jealousy get the best of her or will their love still go on?

1) People commenting on my topic sentence helped me make changes that made it better and helped me get a better understanding of what a topic sentence should sound like.
2) I learned that topic sentences should grab the readers attention by using good words but getting straight to what the rest of the paragraph is going to be like.

topic sentance, carly i

in the infuriating story of the lady and the tiger, the princess doesn't value much, but herself. she didn't want her her lover with anyone else but her. so she would have chosen the tiger over the lady.

what i learned from writing the topic sentence was that you don't want to repeat the question asked, but make a connection to it. and how you have to use better word choice to grab people and to incorporate more detail.