From the story, The Lady or the Tiger, the princess values her father and his views the most because of her love for him.
*From the story The Lady or the Tiger, the princess values her father and his views the most because of the power she craves.
I learned that, well i didn't really learn anything.
Thursday, October 1, 2009
The Lady or the Tiger topic Sentence DanielleZ
The princesses most values are keeping the prince and his love to herself because she doesn't want anyone else to be with him since she considered him to be eaten by the tiger instead of marrying the lady.
*The princess most valued keeping the prince and his love to herself because she doesn't want anyone to be with him since she considered him to be eaten by a tiger instead of marrying the lady.
I learned that sometimes its good to have details in the sentence but to make sure that the details don't over crowd the sentence and make it seem cluttered.
*The princess most valued keeping the prince and his love to herself because she doesn't want anyone to be with him since she considered him to be eaten by a tiger instead of marrying the lady.
I learned that sometimes its good to have details in the sentence but to make sure that the details don't over crowd the sentence and make it seem cluttered.
My Topic Sentence: Rae.A
Values,After reading "The Lady and The Tiger" I think that the princess values the trust and love "The Lover" had for her. In my mind. "The Lover" was wrong to trust the princes, considering she was just like her father who was quite barbaric, and selfish.
**New Topic Sentence**
*** After reading the story "The Lady and The Tiger" by Frank Stockton i think that the princesses jealousy over rules her her feelings for her lover. In my mind, even though the princess loved "The Lover" what the princess values most is herself, and you can see that she is just like her father, selfish and barbaric.***
What I learned: While doing this assignment, i learned how to improve my writing by using sentence fluency and depleting my linking verbs and using stronger words.
**New Topic Sentence**
*** After reading the story "The Lady and The Tiger" by Frank Stockton i think that the princesses jealousy over rules her her feelings for her lover. In my mind, even though the princess loved "The Lover" what the princess values most is herself, and you can see that she is just like her father, selfish and barbaric.***
What I learned: While doing this assignment, i learned how to improve my writing by using sentence fluency and depleting my linking verbs and using stronger words.
Sam Q-C
The thing the princess values the most, is the love from her lover because she became so jealous when was flirting with the other lovely girl, and felt no feeling for her.
After reading what others said about my first topic sentence about The Lady and The Tiger I learned that I need to be more detailed and show things from the story that support my opinion. Learning in this activity was easier because i got to work with others in my class and they gave my ideas on how i could make my writing better.
After reading what others said about my first topic sentence about The Lady and The Tiger I learned that I need to be more detailed and show things from the story that support my opinion. Learning in this activity was easier because i got to work with others in my class and they gave my ideas on how i could make my writing better.
Topic Sentence Amanda A
After reading "The Lady or The Tiger" I can clearly see that the princess values her love with the man more than anything;however,she is self interested and leads the man to the door with the vicious tiger behind it because of her jealousy of the other woman.
In this activity I learned a lot about using the correct sentence structure and sentence fluency. I had a lot of comments about my ending being very confusing but i did go back and fix it. Finally I have to make sure that I use a strong word choice.
In this activity I learned a lot about using the correct sentence structure and sentence fluency. I had a lot of comments about my ending being very confusing but i did go back and fix it. Finally I have to make sure that I use a strong word choice.
Topic Sentence- Hannah F
After reading "The Lady or the Tiger" I've found that even though the princess values her natural barbaric instincts, the life of her lover is valued much more.
* In "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess had hard options, should she tell her lover the door with the lady or the tiger; even though she has a tough choice before her, the love she feels toward her lover will greatly over power her barbaric nature.
After reading the different comments written about my topic sentence I learned that even if you have a really short topic sentence that is OK, because if you have a lot of good information or a good map to your paragraph then your topic sentence will make sense.
* In "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess had hard options, should she tell her lover the door with the lady or the tiger; even though she has a tough choice before her, the love she feels toward her lover will greatly over power her barbaric nature.
After reading the different comments written about my topic sentence I learned that even if you have a really short topic sentence that is OK, because if you have a lot of good information or a good map to your paragraph then your topic sentence will make sense.
The Lady or the Tiger topic sentence Nouhad E.
By doing this topic sentence, i learned how to improve my writing, rewrite my topic sentence, and how to use new vocabulary. I also learned how to proofread others' topic sentences.
1. The princess in "The Lady or the Tiger" most valued jealousy because if her lover picked the door with the lady, he would be married to the lady right before the princess' eyes.
* 2. In "The Lady or the Tiger" by Frank Stockton, the princess greatly valued jealousy. She valued jealousy because if the lover chose the door with the lady in it, the princess would have been jealous that he would be married to the lady. From what the story shows, i think that the princess ushered her lover to the door with the tiger in it so he would not be married to the lady.
* 3. In "The Lady or the Tiger" by Frank Stockton, the princess greatly valued jealousy. From what the story shows, i think that the princess ushered her lover to the door with the tiger in it so he would not be married to the lady.
1. The princess in "The Lady or the Tiger" most valued jealousy because if her lover picked the door with the lady, he would be married to the lady right before the princess' eyes.
* 2. In "The Lady or the Tiger" by Frank Stockton, the princess greatly valued jealousy. She valued jealousy because if the lover chose the door with the lady in it, the princess would have been jealous that he would be married to the lady. From what the story shows, i think that the princess ushered her lover to the door with the tiger in it so he would not be married to the lady.
* 3. In "The Lady or the Tiger" by Frank Stockton, the princess greatly valued jealousy. From what the story shows, i think that the princess ushered her lover to the door with the tiger in it so he would not be married to the lady.
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